Tuesday, August 9, 2011

Do the clouds of time pass unnoticed c/c?

A great poem my friend, a poet you are. Easy going, comfortable, of a slow pace. Your philosophy calmly paces from the one verse to another and they intermingle in a delirium of thoughts and conclusions. A cloud, an old visual, a reflection. A fish net, cast of smiles, also filled with what remains from illusions and confusions. Brilliant! Now I have you, Sir. Strong you are here, stating presence. This lake of emotions lost plus the sunsets want to devour us. This is different. Good! Only thing is the "smiles" instead of miles. I think you should reconsider the "smiles" thing. Maybe not. BUT it is a strong poem. Bravo!

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