Do you like my story so far?

It's not a bad start. I especially liked the setting that you established. You have a few spelling and grammar issues, but those are easy to resolve. Also, your sentence structure is very repetitive; you start many of your sentences with "I", which gets tiring after a while. As for the story itself, it's not bad, maybe just a little cliche (lonely girl with hardly any friends is a stereotypical character in YA lit). You might try to make it more out-of-the-ordinary. Don't be afraid to mix-in completely unique scenarios and characters. That's what will make your audience want to read more. Stick with it!